Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/coreutils.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

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6.0

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8b320e7

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ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/coreutils.xml (modified) (7 diffs)

chapter06/coreutils.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
 <segtitle>Coreutils installation depends on</segtitle>
 <seglistitem><seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, GCC,
-Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Perl, Sed</seg></seglistitem>
+Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Perl, and Sed</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 </sect2>
@@ -53 +53 @@
 presence of files and users that are not valid this early in the LFS
 build. Therefore, additional items need to be set up before running
-the tests. Skip down to <quote>Install the package</quote> if you are
+the tests. Skip down to <quote>Install the package</quote> if
 not running the test suite.</para>
 
@@ -108 +108 @@
 shred, sleep, sort, split, stat, stty, sum, sync, tac, tail, tee,
 test, touch, tr, true, tsort, tty, uname, unexpand, uniq, unlink,
-users, vdir, wc, who, whoami and yes</seg></seglistitem>
+users, vdir, wc, who, whoami, and yes</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -117 +117 @@
 <term><command>basename</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>strips any path and a given suffix from a given file name.</para>
+<para>strips any path and a given suffix from a file name.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-coreutils basename"><primary sortas="b-basename">basename</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -162 +162 @@
 <term><command>chroot</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>runs a given command with the specified directory as the 
+<para>runs a command with the specified directory as the 
 <filename class="directory">/</filename> directory. The given command can be an interactive shell.
 On most systems only <emphasis>root</emphasis> can do this.</para>
@@ -273 +273 @@
 <listitem>
 <para>reports the amount of disk space used by the current directory,
-by each of the given directories (including all subdirectories), or by
+by each of the given directories (including all subdirectories) or by
 each of the given files.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-coreutils du"><primary sortas="b-du">du</primary></indexterm>
@@ -749 +749 @@
 <term><command>tsort</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>performs a topological sort. It writes a totally ordered list
+<para>performs a topological sort. It writes a completely ordered list
 according to the partial ordering in a given file.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-coreutils tsort"><primary sortas="b-tsort">tsort</primary></indexterm>