Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/introduction.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

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6.0

Children:

8b320e7

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ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/introduction.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter06/introduction.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
 <para>In this chapter, we enter the building site and start
 constructing the LFS system in earnest. That is, we chroot into the
-temporary mini Linux system, make a few final preparations and then
+temporary mini Linux system, make a few final preparations, and then
 begin installing the packages.</para>
 
@@ -19 +19 @@
 learning what makes a Linux system work is to know what each package
 is used for and why the user (or the system) needs it.  For every
-installed package, a summary of its content is given, followed by
+installed package, a summary of its contents is given, followed by
 concise descriptions of each program and library the package
 installed.</para>
@@ -27 +27 @@
 url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/>.  Compiler optimizations can make
 a program run slightly faster, but they may also cause compilation
-difficulties, and even problems when running the program. If a package
+difficulties and problems when running the program. If a package
 refuses to compile when using optimization, try to compile it without
 optimization and see if that fixes the problem. Even if the package
@@ -52 +52 @@
 description of what it contains, approximately how long it will take
 to build, how much disk space is required during this building
-process, and any other packages needed to be successfully build the
+process, and any other packages needed to successfully build the
 package. Following the installation instructions, there is a list of
 programs and libraries (along with brief descriptions of these) that
 the package installs.</para>
 
-<para>To keep track of which package installs which files, a package
+<para>To keep track of which package installs particular files, a package
 manager can be used. For a general overview of package managers,
 please see <ulink