Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/ncurses.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/ncurses.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter06/ncurses.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
 <segtitle>Ncurses installation depends on</segtitle>
 <seglistitem><seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils,
-Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, Make, Sed</seg></seglistitem>
+Gawk, GCC, Glibc, Grep, Make, and Sed</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 </sect2>
@@ -48 +48 @@
 <screen><userinput>chmod 755 /usr/lib/*.&ncurses-version;</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Now fix a library that shouldn't be executable:</para>
+<para>Fix a library that should not be executable:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>chmod 644 /usr/lib/libncurses++.a</userinput></screen>
@@ -90 +90 @@
 <term><command>clear</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>clears the screen, if this is possible.</para>
+<para>clears the screen, if possible.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-ncurses clear"><primary sortas="b-clear">clear</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -169 +169 @@
 <term><filename class="libraryfile">>libncurses*</filename></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>contains functions to display text in many complicated ways on a
+<para>contains functions to display text in many complex ways on a
 terminal screen. A good example of the use of these functions is the
 menu displayed during the kernel's <command>make menuconfig</command>.</para>