Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/readjusting.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/readjusting.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

chapter06/readjusting.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 ]>
 <sect1 id="ch-system-readjusting">
-<title>Re-adjusting the toolchain</title>
+<title>Re-adjusting the Toolchain</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="readjusting.html"?>
 
@@ -14 +14 @@
 <quote>Adjusting</quote> phase in the beginning of <xref
 linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>, even though it looks to be
-reversed -- in that chapter, the chain was guided from the host's
-<filename class="directory">/{,usr/}lib</filename> directories to the
-new <filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename> directory. Now,
-the chain will be guided from that same <filename
-class="directory">/tools/lib</filename> directory to the LFS's
+reversed. In <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>, the chain was
+guided from the host's <filename
+class="directory">/{,usr/}lib</filename> directories to the new
+<filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename> directory. Now, the
+chain will be guided from that same <filename
+class="directory">/tools/lib</filename> directory to the LFS
 <filename class="directory">/{,usr/}lib</filename> directories.</para>
 
@@ -49 +50 @@
 class="symlink">ginstall</filename> symbolic link which takes
 precedence in the <filename>Makefile</filename> file and can cause a
-problem here. The above command takes care of this issue.</para>
+problem. The above command takes care of this issue.</para>
 
 <para>Remove the Binutils source and build directories now.</para>
 
 <para>Next, amend the GCC specs file so that it points to the new
-dynamic linker. A sed to accomplish this just like before:</para>
+dynamic linker. A sed command accomplishes this:</para>
 
 <!-- Ampersands are needed to allow cut and paste -->
@@ -61 +62 @@
     `gcc --print-file specs`</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Cutting and pasting the above is recommended. It is a good idea
+<para>Copying and pasting the above is recommended. It is a good idea
 to visually inspect the specs file to verify the intended change was
 actually made.</para>
@@ -75 +76 @@
 <caution><para>It is imperative at this point to stop and ensure that
 the basic functions (compiling and linking) of the adjusted toolchain
-are working as expected. To do this, perform a simple sanity
+are working as expected. To do this, perform a sanity
 check:</para>
 
@@ -83 +84 @@
 
 <para>If everything is working correctly, there should be no errors,
-and the output of the last command will be (allowing for platform
-specific differences in dynamic linker name):</para>
+and the output of the last command will be (allowing for
+platform-specific differences in dynamic linker name):</para>
 
 <screen><computeroutput>[Requesting program interpreter: /lib/ld-linux.so.2]</computeroutput></screen>
 
-<para>Note especially that <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> is now
+<para>Note that <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> is now
 the prefix of our dynamic linker.</para>