Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/sysklogd.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/sysklogd.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter06/sysklogd.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
 <segmentedlist>
 <segtitle>Sysklogd installation depends on</segtitle>
-<seglistitem><seg>Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, Make</seg></seglistitem>
+<seglistitem><seg>Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc, and Make</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 </sect2>
@@ -91 +91 @@
 <term><command>klogd</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>is a system daemon for intercepting and logging kernel messages.</para>
+<para>a system daemon for intercepting and logging kernel messages.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-sysklogd klogd"><primary sortas="b-klogd">klogd</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -101 +101 @@
 <para>logs the messages that system programs offer for logging. Every
 logged message contains at least a date stamp and a hostname, and
-normally the program's name too depending on how ?trusting? the
-logging daemon is told to be.</para>
+normally the program's name too depending on how
+<quote>trusting</quote> the logging daemon is told to be.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-sysklogd syslogd"><primary sortas="b-syslogd">syslogd</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>