Changeset 69993f4 for chapter07/bootscripts.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter07/bootscripts.xml (modified) (10 diffs)

chapter07/bootscripts.xml

@@ -21 +21 @@
 <segmentedlist>
 <segtitle>LFS-Bootscripts installation depends on</segtitle>
-<seglistitem><seg>Bash, Coreutils</seg></seglistitem>
+<seglistitem><seg>Bash and Coreutils</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 </sect2>
@@ -41 +41 @@
 <seglistitem><seg>checkfs, cleanfs, console, functions, halt, ifdown, ifup,
 localnet, mountfs, mountkernfs, network, rc, reboot, sendsignals, setclock, static, 
-swap, sysklogd, template and udev</seg></seglistitem>
+swap, sysklogd, template, and udev</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -63 +63 @@
 <filename class="directory">/var/lock/</filename>. It re-creates <filename>/var/run/utmp</filename>
 and removes the possibly present <filename>/etc/nologin</filename>,
-<filename>/fastboot</filename> and <filename>/forcefsck</filename> files.</para>
+<filename>/fastboot</filename>, and <filename>/forcefsck</filename> files.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts cleanfs-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-cleanfs">cleanfs</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -71 +71 @@
 <term><command>console</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>loads the keymap table you specified as proper for the keyboard
+<para>loads the keymap table specified as proper for the keyboard
 layout.  It also sets the screen font.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts console-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-console">console</primary></indexterm>
@@ -97 +97 @@
 <term><command>ifdown</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>assist the network script with network devices.</para>
+<para>assists the network script with network devices.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts ifdown-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-ifdown">ifdown</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -105 +105 @@
 <term><command>ifup</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>assist the network script with network devices.</para>
+<para>assists the network script with network devices.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts ifup-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-ifup">ifup</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -148 +148 @@
 <term><command>rc</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>is the master run-level control script.  It is responsible for
-running all the other scripts one-by-one, in a sequence determined by
+<para>the master run-level control script.  It is responsible for
+running all other scripts one-by-one, in a sequence determined by
 the name of the symbolic links being processed.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts rc-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-rc">rc</primary></indexterm>
@@ -175 +175 @@
 <term><command>setclock</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>resets the kernel clock to localtime in case the hardware clock
+<para>resets the kernel clock to local time in case the hardware clock
 is not set to UTC time.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts setclock-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-setclock">setclock</primary></indexterm>
@@ -184 +184 @@
 <term><command>static</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>provides the functionality needed to assign a static IP address
-to a network interface.</para>
+<para>provides the functionality needed to assign a static Internet
+Protocol (IP) address to a network interface.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts static-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-static">static</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -209 +209 @@
 <term><command>template</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>is a template to create custom bootscripts for other
+<para>a template to create custom bootscripts for other
 daemons.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts template-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-template">template</primary></indexterm>