Changeset 69993f4 for chapter09/getcounted.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter09/getcounted.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter09/getcounted.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="getcounted.html"?>
 
-<para>Want to be counted as an LFS user now that you have finished the
-book? Head over to <ulink url="&lfs-root;cgi-bin/lfscounter.cgi"/> and
-register as an LFS user by entering your name and the first LFS
-version you have used.</para>
+<para>Now that you have finished the book, do you want to be counted
+as an LFS user? Head over to <ulink
+url="&lfs-root;cgi-bin/lfscounter.cgi"/> and register as an LFS user
+by entering your name and the first LFS version you have used.</para>
 
-<para>Let's reboot into LFS now...</para>
+<para>Let's reboot into LFS now.</para>
 
 </sect1>