Changeset 69993f4 for prologue/organization.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• prologue/organization.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

prologue/organization.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="organization.html"?>
 
-<para>This book is divided into the following parts:</para>
+<para>This book is divided into the following parts.</para>
 
 <sect2>
@@ -15 +15 @@
 <para>Part I explains a few important notes on how to proceed with the
 LFS installation.  This section also provides meta-information about
-the book (version, changelog, acknowledgments, associated mailing
-lists, etc.).</para>
+the book.</para>
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2>
-<title>Part II - Preparing for the build</title>
+<title>Part II - Preparing for the Build</title>
 
 <para>Part II describes how to prepare for the building process?making
@@ -28 +27 @@
 
 <sect2>
-<title>Part III - Building the LFS system</title>
+<title>Part III - Building the LFS System</title>
 
 <para>Part III guides the reader through the building of the LFS
-system -- compiling and installing all the packages one by one,
+system&mdash;compiling and installing all the packages one by one,
 setting up the boot scripts, and installing the kernel. The resulting
 Linux system is the foundation on which other software can be built to
-extend the system as desired. At the end of this book, there is an
+expand the system as desired. At the end of this book, there is an
 easy to use reference listing all of the programs, libraries, and
 important files that have been installed.</para>