Changeset 6d60bfc

Timestamp:

09/18/2022 09:57:53 PM (20 months ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

5de4fea4

Parents:

cdc6053

Message:

Chapter 11 text updates.

Location:

chapter11

Files:

• afterlfs.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• reboot.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• theend.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter11/afterlfs.xml

@@ -53 +53 @@
 
      <para>
-        In addition to the above, there is a set of applications that are
-        suitable for all systems for system management. These applications are
-        all in the BLFS book. Not
-        all packages are needed in all environments. For example
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>,
-        is not appropriate for a server and
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
-        are normally only
-        useful for a laptop system. If you are not sure if a package presented
-        here is needed or not, it can either be installed now or later as the
-        need arises.
+        In addition to the above, there is a set of applications for system
+        management for all kinds of systems. These applications are all in the
+        BLFS book. Not all packages are needed in every environments For
+        example <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>, is
+        not normally appropriate for a server and <ulink
+        url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
+        are normally only useful for a laptop system. 
      </para>
 
@@ -253 +249 @@
             <keycap>Fx</keycap>
           </keycombo>
-          combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
+          combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> is usually 
+          <keycap>F1</keycap> but may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
         </para>
       </note>

chapter11/reboot.xml

@@ -78 +78 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Finally, a review of the following configuration files
+        A review of the following configuration files
         is also appropriate at this point.
       </para>
@@ -123 +123 @@
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>
+  <para>Now, reboot the system.</para>
 
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
+<!--<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>-->
 
   <para>Assuming the GRUB boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu

chapter11/theend.xml

@@ -61 +61 @@
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Be sure to put some sort of customization for the fields
-  'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely
-  yours.</para>
+  <para>Be sure to customize the fields 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and
+  'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely yours.</para>
 
 </sect1>