Changeset 6d60bfc for chapter11/reboot.xml

Timestamp:

09/18/2022 09:57:53 PM (20 months ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

5de4fea4

Parents:

cdc6053

Message:

Chapter 11 text updates.

File:

• chapter11/reboot.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter11/reboot.xml

@@ -78 +78 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Finally, a review of the following configuration files
+        A review of the following configuration files
         is also appropriate at this point.
       </para>
@@ -123 +123 @@
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>
+  <para>Now, reboot the system.</para>
 
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
+<!--<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>-->
 
   <para>Assuming the GRUB boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu