Changeset 72033583 for preface/organpart1.xml

Timestamp:

03/18/2001 07:30:50 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Thomas Balu Walter <tw@…>

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• preface/organpart1.xml (modified) (1 diff)

preface/organpart1.xml

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 <para>
-Part One gives you general information about this book (versions, where
+Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where
 to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with me).
-It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to
-read before you start building an LFS system.
+It also explains a few important aspects a user really wants and needs to
+read before starting to build an LFS system.
 </para>