Changeset 782446b for chapter04/aboutsbus.xml

Timestamp:

06/30/2005 03:41:55 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

Branches:

6.1, 6.1.1

Children:

9ff62fda

Parents:

d6c28f96

Message:

Merged wording changes from trunk (r6232, r6233, r6248).

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@6252 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter04/aboutsbus.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter04/aboutsbus.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
 
 <para>In general, SBUs are not entirely accurate because they depend on many
-factors, not just the GCC version. Note that on Symmetric Multi-Processor
-(SMP)-based machines, SBUs are even less accurate.  They are provided here to
-give an estimate of how long it might take to install a package, but the numbers
-can vary by as much as dozens of minutes in some cases.</para>
+factors, including the host system's version of GCC. Note that on Symmetric
+Multi-Processor (SMP)-based machines, SBUs are even less accurate.  They are
+provided here to give an estimate of how long it might take to install a
+package, but the numbers can vary by as much as dozens of minutes in some
+cases.</para>
 
 <para>To view actual timings for a number of specific machines, we recommend