Changeset 782446b for prologue/audience.xml

Timestamp:

06/30/2005 03:41:55 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

Branches:

6.1, 6.1.1

Children:

9ff62fda

Parents:

d6c28f96

Message:

Merged wording changes from trunk (r6232, r6233, r6248).

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@6252 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• prologue/audience.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

prologue/audience.xml

@@ -9 +9 @@
 
 <para>There are many reasons why somebody would want to read this
-book. The principle reason is to install a Linux system straight
+book. The principle reason is to install a Linux system
 from the source code. A question many people raise is, <quote>why go
 through all the hassle of manually building a Linux system from
@@ -33 +33 @@
 Linux system. When installing a regular distribution, one is often
 forced to include several programs which are probably never used.
-These programs waste precious disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
+These programs waste disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
 not difficult to build an LFS system of less than 100 megabytes (MB),
-which is substantially smaller when compared to the majority of existing installations.  Does
+which is substantially smaller than the majority of existing installations.  Does
 this still sound like a lot of space? A few of us have been working on
 creating a very small embedded LFS system. We successfully built a