Changeset 81a47c0 for chapter06/vim-inst.xml

Timestamp:

03/19/2001 04:02:50 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Thomas Balu Walter <tw@…>

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• chapter06/vim-inst.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter06/vim-inst.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para>
-If you don't like vim to be installed as an editor on your LFS system,
-you may want to download an alternative and install an editor you
-prefer. There are a few hints how to install different editors
+If a user doesn't like vim to be installed as an editor on the LFS system,
+he may want to download an alternative and install an editor he 
+prefers. There are a few hints how to install different editors
 available at <ulink
 url="http://cvs.linuxfromscratch.org/index.cgi/hints/editors/">
@@ -12 +12 @@
 
 <para>
-You need to unpack both the vim-rt and vim-src packages to install Vim.
+Both the vim-rt and vim-src packages need to be unpacked to install Vim.
 Both packages will unpack their files into the vim-5.7 directory. This
 won't overwrite any files from the other package. So it doesn't mattter
-in which order you do it. Install Vim by running the following commands:
+in which order it is done. Install Vim by running the following commands:
 </para>
 
@@ -29 +29 @@
 
 <para>
-If you are planning on installing the X Window system on your LFS
-system, you might want to re-compile Vim after you have installed X. Vim
+If a user plans on installing the X Window system on his LFS
+system, he might want to re-compile Vim after he has installed X. Vim
 comes with a nice GUI version of the editor which requires X and a few
 other libraries to be installed. For more information read the Vim