Changeset 86f3868

Timestamp:

10/17/2022 08:46:25 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

294ea05

Parents:

6d46ee62

Message:

Websters spells it up-to-date. Added one word for clarity.

File:

• chapter02/hostreqs.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter02/hostreqs.xml

@@ -84 +84 @@
 
       <para>If the host kernel is earlier than &min-kernel; you will need to replace
-      the kernel with a more up to date version. There are two ways
+      the kernel with a more up-to-date version. There are two ways
       you can go about this. First, see if your Linux vendor provides a &min-kernel;
       or later kernel package. If so, you may wish to install it. If your
@@ -149 +149 @@
 
   <para >To see whether your host system has all the appropriate versions, and
-  the ability to compile programs, run the following:</para>
+  the ability to compile programs, run the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>cat &gt; version-check.sh &lt;&lt; "EOF"