Changeset 87c057b for chapter02/commands.xml

Timestamp:

03/22/2001 03:27:52 AM (23 years ago)

Author:

Simon Perreault <nomis80@…>

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Children:

d251197

Parents:

9bfaaae

Message:

Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@347 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter02/commands.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter02/commands.xml

@@ -6 +6 @@
 commands for the packages installed in this book. These files can be
 used to dump to a shell and install the packages, though some files 
-need to be modified (for example when the console-tools package is 
-installed it is needed to select the keyboard layout file which can't be
+need to be modified (for example, when the console-tools package is 
+installed, it is needed to select the keyboard layout file, which can't be
 guessed).
 </para>
@@ -15 +15 @@
 changed between the different LFS versions as well. A user just downloads the
 lfs-commands tarball for this book version and the previous book version 
-and run a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages
+and runs a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages
 have 
-updated installation instructions and he can modify his own scripts, or 
+updated installation instructions, and he can modify his own scripts or 
 reinstall a package if it seems necessary.
 </para>
@@ -26 +26 @@
 http://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/</ulink> or <ulink
 url="ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/">
-ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/</ulink>
+ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/</ulink>.
 </para>