Changeset 89fcc34 for chapter06/nettools-inst.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2003 11:20:23 PM (21 years ago)

Author:

Alex Gronenwoud <alex@…>

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Message:

Putting text before the 'make check's, and smoothing the other lines.

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• chapter06/nettools-inst.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter06/nettools-inst.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <title>Installation of Net-tools</title>
 
-<para>If you don't know what to answer to all the questions asked during
-the <userinput>make</userinput> phase, then just accept the defaults, which
-will be just fine in the majority of the cases. What you are asked here
-are a bunch of questions relating to the kind of network protocols that you
-have enabled in your kernel.</para>
+<para>If you don't know what to answer to all the questions asked during the
+<userinput>make config</userinput> phase below, then just accept the defaults.
+This will be just fine in the majority of cases. What you're asked here is a
+bunch of questions about which network protocols you've enabled in your
+kernel. The default answers will enable the tools from this package to work
+with the most common protocols: TCP, PPP, and several others. You still need
+to actually enable these protocols in the kernel -- what you do here is merely
+telling the package to include support for those protocols in its programs,
+but it's up to the kernel to make the protocols available.</para>
 
-<para>The default answers will enable the tools from this package to work
-with the most common protocols such as TCP, PPP and a bunch of others. You
-still need to actually enable these protocols in the kernel. What you do
-here is merely telling the programs to be able to use those protocols, but
-it's up to the kernel to make them available to the system.</para>
-
-<para>Configure the Net-tools package:</para>
+<para>Prepare Net-tools for compilation with:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make config</userinput></screen></para>
@@ -28 +26 @@
 <para><screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Finish installing the package:</para>
+<para>And install it:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make update</userinput></screen></para>