Changeset a22f6e7 for preface/whonotread.xml

Timestamp:

09/11/2002 10:22:24 PM (22 years ago)

Author:

Timothy Bauscher <timothy@…>

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Message:

Grammatic changes to the preface.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2084 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• preface/whonotread.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

preface/whonotread.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 
 <para>If you do not wish to build your own Linux system from scratch, then
-you probably do not want to read this book. Our goal is to build a complete
+you probably don't want to read this book. Our goal is to build a complete
 and useable foundation system. If you only want to know what happens while
-your computer boots, then, we recommend the
-<quote>From-PowerUp-To-Bash-Prompt-HOWTO</quote>. The HOWTO builds a bare
+your computer boots, then we recommend the
+<quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> HOWTO. The HOWTO builds a bare
 system which is similar to that of this book, but it focuses strictly on
 creating a system capable of booting to a BASH prompt.</para>
@@ -13 +13 @@
 <para>While you decide which to read, consider your objective. If you wish
 to build a Linux system while learning a bit along the way, then this book
-is probably your best choice. If your objective is strictly educational, and
+is probably your best choice. If your objective is strictly educational and
 you do not have any plans for your finished system, then the
-From-PowerUp-To-Bash-Prompt-HOWTO is probably a better choice.</para>
+<quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> HOWTO is probably a better choice.</para>
 
-<para>The <quote>From-PowerUp-To-Bash-Prompt-HOWTO</quote> is located at
+<para>The <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> HOWTO is located at
 <ulink url="http://www.netspace.net.au/~gok/power2bash/"/>.</para>