Changeset a8e58c7e

Timestamp:

03/15/2001 05:08:12 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Simon Perreault <nomis80@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_0, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

01f6681

Parents:

01c8218

Message:

Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@327 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter02

Files:

• bootscripts.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• install.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter02/bootscripts.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <para>
 Typing out all the bootscripts in chapters 7 and 9 can be a long tedious
-process, not to mention very error prone.
+process, not to mention very error-prone.
 </para>
 
@@ -13 +13 @@
 http://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink> or <ulink
 url="ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/">
-ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink>
+ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink>.
 </para>
 

chapter02/install.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 Before you can actually start doing something with a package, you need
 to unpack it first. Often you will find the package files being tar'ed and
-gzip'ed (you can determind this by looking at the extension of the file.
-tar'ed and gzip'ed archives have a .tar.gz or .tgz extension for
-example)). I'm not going to write down every time how to ungzip and how 
-to untar an archive. I will tell you how to do that once, in this paragraph. 
+gzip'ed. (You can determine this by looking at the extension of the file.
+tar'ed and gzip'ed archives have a .tar.gz or .tgz extension, for
+example.) I'm not going to write down every time how to ungzip and how 
+to untar an archive. I will tell you how to do that once, in this section. 
 There is also the possibility  that you have the ability of downloading 
 a .tar.bz2 file. Such a file is tar'ed and compressed with the bzip2 program. 
@@ -74 +74 @@
 current directory (and this document assumes that you unpack the archives
 under the $LFS/usr/src directory). You have to enter that new directory
-before you continue with the installation instructions. So everytime the
+before you continue with the installation instructions. So every time the
 book is going to install a program, it's up to you to unpack the source
 archive.
@@ -92 +92 @@
 After you have installed a package you can do two things with it. You can
 either delete the directory that contains the sources or you can keep it.
-If you decide to keep it, that's fine by me. But if you need the same package
-again in a later chapter you need to delete the directory first before using
+If you decide to keep it, that's fine with me. But, if you need the same package
+again in a later chapter, you need to delete the directory first before using
 it again. If you don't do this, you might end up in trouble because old
 settings will be used (settings that apply to your normal Linux system but