Changeset aabd480 for chapter06/hotplug.xml

Timestamp:

07/01/2005 11:16:14 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

Branches:

6.1, 6.1.1

Children:

808f5af

Parents:

90b56f5

Message:

Brought all occurences of LFS-Bootscripts into conformity. (merged from trunk r6288)

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@6308 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter06/hotplug.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter06/hotplug.xml

@@ -41 +41 @@
 <screen><userinput>cp etc/hotplug/pnp.distmap /etc/hotplug</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Remove the init script that Hotplug installs, since we're going to be
-using the script included with LFS-Bootscripts:</para>
+<para>Remove the init script that Hotplug installs since we are going to be
+using the script included in the LFS-Bootscripts package:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>rm -rf /etc/init.d</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Network device hotplugging is not supported by LFS-Bootscripts yet. For
-that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:</para>
+<para>Network device hotplugging is not yet supported by the LFS-Bootscripts
+package. For that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>rm -f /etc/hotplug/net.agent</userinput></screen>
@@ -91 +91 @@
 <listitem>
 <para>These scripts are used for cold plugging, i.e., detecting and acting upon
-hardware already present during system startup.  They are called by the
-<filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes from the LFS-Bootscripts
-package.  The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that
-were lost during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not
-mounted by the kernel</para>
+hardware already present during system startup. They are called by the
+<filename>hotplug</filename> initscript included in the LFS-Bootscripts package.
+The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that were lost
+during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not mounted by
+the kernel</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-rc"><primary
 sortas="d-/etc/hotplug/*.rc">/etc/hotplug/*.rc</primary></indexterm>