Changeset aefc822 for chapter07/tcl.xml

Timestamp:

06/11/2020 05:55:06 AM (4 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

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10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

302d97a

Parents:

387a32af

Message:

Updates to the rest of cross2 Chapter 7.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11919 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter07/tcl.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

chapter07/tcl.xml

@@ -46 +46 @@
 
     <para>This package and the next two (Expect and DejaGNU) are
-    installed to support running the test suites for GCC and Binutils and other
+    installed to support running the test suites for GCC and binutils and other
     packages.  Installing three packages for testing purposes may seem
     excessive, but it is very reassuring, if not essential, to know that the
@@ -71 +71 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>The construct <parameter>$(&lt;shell command&gt;)</parameter>
-          is replaced by the output of the chell command.  Here this output is
+          is replaced by the output of the shell command.  Here this output is
           empty if running on a 32 bit machine, and is
           <parameter>--enable-64bit</parameter> if running on a 64 bit machine.
@@ -101 +101 @@
 unset SRCDIR</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The various <quote>sed</quote> after the <quote>make</quote> command
-    remove references to the build directory from various configuration files,
-    and replaces them with the install directory. This is not mandatory
-    for the remaining of LFS, but may be needed in case a package built later
-    uses Tcl.</para>
+    <para>The various <quote>sed</quote> instructions after the
+    <quote>make</quote> command removes references to the build directory from
+    the configuration files and replaces them with the install directory.
+    This is not mandatory for the remainder of LFS, but may be needed in case a
+    package built later uses Tcl.</para>
 
     <para>Install the package:</para>
@@ -116 +116 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="install">chmod -v u+w /usr/lib/libtcl&tcl-major-version;.so</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install Tcl's headers. The next package, Expect, requires them
-    to build.</para>
+    <para>Install Tcl's headers. The next package, Expect, requires them.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install-private-headers</userinput></screen>
@@ -135 +134 @@
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>tclsh (link to tclsh&tcl-major-version;) and tclsh&tcl-major-version;</seg>
-        <seg>libtcl&tcl-major-version;.so, libtclstub&tcl-major-version;.a</seg>
+        <seg>
+          tclsh (link to tclsh&tcl-major-version;) and 
+          tclsh&tcl-major-version;
+        </seg>
+        <seg>
+          libtcl&tcl-major-version;.so and 
+          libtclstub&tcl-major-version;.a
+        </seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>