Changeset b568bbaf for chapter07/hostname.xml

Timestamp:

07/02/2005 05:16:45 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

Branches:

6.1, 6.1.1

Children:

b8a3fb2

Parents:

464fa64f

Message:

Several minor wording changes in chapter 8. (merge from trunk r6318)

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@6336 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter07/hostname.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter07/hostname.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 <secondary>configuring</secondary></indexterm>
 
-<para>Part of the <command>localnet</command> script is setting up the system's
-hostname. This needs to be configured in the
+<para>Part of the job of the <command>localnet</command> script is setting the
+system's hostname. This needs to be configured in the
 <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> file.</para>
 
-<para>Create the <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> file and enter a hostname by
-running:</para>
+<para>Create the <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> file and enter a
+hostname by running:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo "HOSTNAME=<replaceable>[lfs]</replaceable>" &gt; /etc/sysconfig/network</userinput></screen>
 
-<para><replaceable>[lfs]</replaceable> needs to be replaced with the
-name the computer is to be called. Do not enter the Fully Qualified
-Domain Name (FQDN) here. That information will be put in the
-<filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file later.</para>
+<para><replaceable>[lfs]</replaceable> needs to be replaced with the name given
+to the computer. Do not enter the Fully Qualified Domain Name (FQDN) here. That
+information will be put in the <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file in the next
+section.</para>
 
 </sect1>