Changeset b59b371 for chapter08/glibc.xml

Timestamp:

11/19/2022 08:27:13 AM (18 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

2ef64c4

Parents:

4d3f41c (diff), 651f491 (diff)
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Message:

Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/clfs-ng

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• chapter08/glibc.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

chapter08/glibc.xml

@@ -44 +44 @@
     <title>Installation of Glibc</title>
 
-    <para>First, fix an issue building Glibc with parallel jobs and make-4.4
+    <para>First, fix an issue building Glibc with parallel jobs and Make-4.4
     or later:</para>
 
@@ -91 +91 @@
         <term><parameter>--enable-kernel=&linux-major-version;.&linux-minor-version;</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This option tells the build system that this glibc may
+          <para>This option tells the build system that this Glibc may
           be used with kernels as old as
           &linux-major-version;.&linux-minor-version;. This means generating
@@ -219 +219 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Fix hardcoded path to the executable loader in
+    <para>Fix a hardcoded path to the executable loader in the
     <command>ldd</command> script:</para>
 
@@ -237 +237 @@
 
     <para>Next, install the locales that can make the system respond in a
-    different language.  None of the locales are required, but if some of them
-    are missing, the test suites of future packages would skip important
-    testcases.</para>
+    different language.  None of these locales are required, but if some of them
+    are missing, the test suites of some packages will skip important
+    test cases.</para>
 
     <para>Individual locales can be installed using the
@@ -292 +292 @@
     character set.</para>
 
-    <para>Alternatively, install all locales listed in the
+    <para>Alternatively, install all the locales listed in the
     <filename>glibc-&glibc-version;/localedata/SUPPORTED</filename> file
     (it includes every locale listed above and many more) at once with the
@@ -358 +358 @@
 
     <sect3>
-    <title>Adding time zone data</title>
+    <title>Adding Time Zone Data</title>
 
     <para>Install and set up the time zone data with the following:</para>