Changeset b99b7d3 for chapter02/stages.xml

Timestamp:

06/09/2020 05:25:59 PM (4 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

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Children:

ee714d3

Parents:

3369724

Message:

Update text in cross2 branch Chapter 2.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11912 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter02/stages.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter02/stages.xml

@@ -42 +42 @@
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Those two chapters must be done as user <emphasis>lfs</emphasis>.
-        A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in this
-        part. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
-        host, and render it unusable.</para>
+        <para>Threse two chapters must be done as user <emphasis>lfs</emphasis>.
+        A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in these
+        chapters. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
+        host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -52 +52 @@
          are critical.  If there is any
          doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded
-         tarballs are removed, re-extract the package files, and complete all
+         tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all
          instructions in that section.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -68 +68 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to
-        <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the
-        root user, with LFS set for the root user.</para>
+        <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the
+        root user, with the LFS envirnment variable set for the root user.</para>
       </listitem>