Changeset bed61bb for appendixa/kernel-desc.xml

Timestamp:

09/22/2002 02:22:43 PM (22 years ago)

Author:

Timothy Bauscher <timothy@…>

Branches:

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Children:

639a66c

Parents:

69f8606d

Message:

Applied Alex's grammatic-fixes patch.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2128 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• appendixa/kernel-desc.xml (modified) (1 diff)

appendixa/kernel-desc.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 Linux tick. When a computer is turned on and boots a Linux system, the
 very first piece of Linux software that gets loaded is the kernel. The
-kernel initializes the system's hardware components such as serial
-ports, parallel ports, sound cards, network cards, IDE controllers, SCSI
-controllers and a lot more. In a nutshell the kernel makes the hardware
-available so that the software can run.</para></sect4>
+kernel initializes the system's hardware components: serial ports, parallel
+ports, sound cards, network cards, IDE controllers, SCSI controllers and a
+lot more. In a nutshell the kernel makes the hardware available so that the
+software can run.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>linux kernel headers</title>
-<para>These are the files we copy to /usr/include/{linux,asm} in chapter
-5.  They should match those which glibc was compiled against and so
-should <emphasis>not</emphasis> be replaced when upgrading the kernel.
-They are essential for compiling many programs.</para></sect4>
+<para>These are the files we copy to
+<filename>/usr/include/{linux,asm}</filename> in chapter 5.  They should
+match those which glibc was compiled against and therefore should
+<emphasis>not</emphasis> be replaced when upgrading the kernel. They are
+essential for compiling many programs.</para></sect4>
 
 </sect3>