Changeset c093e6b for chapter04/introduction.xml

Timestamp:

10/01/2022 10:30:12 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

Thomas Trepl (Moody) <thomas@…>

Branches:

multilib

Children:

f3b2f16

Parents:

f29824e (diff), 4349661 (diff)
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Message:

Automatic merge of trunk into multilib

File:

• chapter04/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter04/introduction.xml

@@ -13 +13 @@
   <para>In this chapter, we will perform a few additional tasks to prepare
   for building the temporary system. We will create a set of directories in
-  <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> for the installation of the
-  temporary tools, add an unprivileged user to reduce risk,
+  <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> (in which we will install the
+  temporary tools), add an unprivileged user,
   and create an appropriate build environment for that user. We will also
-  explain the unit of time we use to measure how long LFS packages take to
-  build, or <quote>SBUs</quote>, and give some information about package
+  explain the units of time (<quote>SBUs</quote>) we use to measure how
+  long it takes to build LFS packages, and provide some information about package
   test suites.</para>