Changeset c61dd1e for preface/organpart2.xml

Timestamp:

05/31/2002 12:03:05 PM (22 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

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Children:

1f9327f

Parents:

53c19e7

Message:

applied Scot's LFS-BOOK-CVS-20020530-XML.patch

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1954 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• preface/organpart2.xml (modified) (1 diff)

preface/organpart2.xml

@@ -1 +1 @@
 <sect2 id="pre-organ2">
-<title>Part II - Installation of the LFS system</title>
+<title>Part II - Installation of the base LFS system</title>
 
-<para>Part Two guides you through the installation of the LFS system which will 
-be the foundation for the rest of the system. Whatever you choose to do 
-with your brand new LFS system, it will be built on the foundation 
-that's installed in this part.</para>
+<para>Part II guides you through the building and installation of an LFS
+system. The finished LFS system will be the core foundation that the rest
+of your Linux system will be built on. What you choose to do with your brand
+new LFS system will be built and supported by this foundation that we build
+in Part II.</para>
 
 </sect2>