Changeset c6d5b092 for prologue/why.xml

Timestamp:

01/09/2010 07:15:55 AM (14 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

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Children:

a55f5b38

Parents:

281a7d3

Message:

Grammar and spelling updates

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@9146 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• prologue/why.xml (modified) (7 diffs)

prologue/why.xml

@@ -13 +13 @@
     <para>As stated earlier, the goal of LFS is to build a complete and usable 
     foundation-level system.  This includes all packages needed to replicate 
-    itself while providing a relativly minimal base from which to customize
+    itself while providing a relatively minimal base from which to customize
     a more complete system based on the choices of the user.  This does not
     mean that LFS is the smallest system possible.  Several important packages
@@ -51 +51 @@
 
         <para>This package package contains a linker, an assembler, and other 
-        tools for handling object files.  </para>
+        tools for handling object files.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -58 +58 @@
 
         <para>This package contains the GNU version of yacc (Yet Another
-        Compiler Compiler) needed to build several other LFS  programs.
+        Compiler Compiler) needed to build several other LFS programs.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -103 +103 @@
 
         <para>This package contains the utilities for handling the ext2, ext3
-        and ext4 file systems.  These are the most common and thouroughly
+        and ext4 file systems.  These are the most common and thoroughly
         tested file systems that Linux supports.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -240 +240 @@
 
         <para>This package contains a very nice text file viewer that
-        allows scolling up or down when viewing a file.   
+        allows scrolling up or down when viewing a file.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -330 +330 @@
 
         <para>This package is an interpreter for the runtime language
-        PERL.  </para>
+        PERL.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -437 +437 @@
         <para>Vim</para>
 
-        <para>This package an editor.  It was chosen because its compatibility
-        with the classic vi editor and its huge number of powerful
+        <para>This package contains an editor. It was chosen because of its
+        compatibility with the classic vi editor and its huge number of powerful
         capabilities.  An editor is a very personal choice for
         many users and any other editor could be substituted if desired.