Changeset c7c614de for prologue/cross.xml

Timestamp:

02/08/2024 04:33:29 AM (5 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

4d7ccf4

Parents:

9e76c64

Message:

cross-ng: Grammar fixes in edition description

File:

• prologue/cross.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

prologue/cross.xml

@@ -48 +48 @@
     purpose of this approach was to fix multiple issues found by Iterative
     Comparision Analysis.  With Pierre's work, the only change needed by
-    this edition is basically <quote>to reboot instead of chroot</quote>.
+    this edition is basically <quote>to reboot instead of chroot.</quote>
     However, some additional steps is needed to make the system bootable
     at the end of Chapter 6, and setting up an environment suitable for
@@ -59 +59 @@
     is booted with a shell running as PID 1, and some necessary jobs of a
     normal <command>init</command> process are manually done with commands.
-    This minimizes the difference from the main LFS book, and also helpful
-    to learn the initialization steps booting a Linux system.</para>
+    This minimizes the difference from the main LFS book, and it's also
+    helpful for learning the initialization steps booting a Linux
+    system.</para>
   </sect2>