Changeset c84ddd9

Timestamp:

10/05/2003 12:57:37 PM (21 years ago)

Author:

Alex Gronenwoud <alex@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

022d450

Parents:

7da1bff

Message:

Some more adjustments.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2923 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter04/chapter04.xml (modified) (4 diffs)
• chapter05/creatingstage1dir.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/setting-environment.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter06/bison-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter06/gettext-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter06/zlib-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter04/chapter04.xml

@@ -18 +18 @@
 
 <para>All the URLs, when possible, refer to the project's page at
-<ulink url="http://www.freshmeat.net"/>. The Freshmeat
+<ulink url="http://www.freshmeat.net/"/>. The Freshmeat
 pages will give you easy access to the official download sites as well as
 project websites, mailinglists, FAQs, Changelogs and more.</para>
@@ -25 +25 @@
 to you. In case a download location has changed since this book was
 published, please try to google for the package. Should you remain
-unsuccessful with this you should consult the book's errata page at
-<ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/print"/> or try
-the alternative means of download listed at 
+unsuccessful with this, you can consult the book's errata page at
+<ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/print/"/> or try
+the alternative means of downloading given at 
 <ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/packages.html"/></para>
 
@@ -33 +33 @@
 that is conveniently available throughout the entire build. You'll also need a
 working directory in which to unpack the sources and build them. A scheme that
-works well is to use $LFS/tools/src/packages for all the downloaded files and
-$LFS/tools/src for the working directory. In this way, everything will be on the
-LFS partition and always available. Normally, you should delete the source and
-build directories after each package installation, unless instructed to do
-otherwise.</para>
+works well is to use <filename>$LFS/tools/src/packages</filename> for all the
+downloaded files and <filename>$LFS/tools/src</filename> for the working
+directory. In this way, everything will be on the LFS partition and always
+available.</para>
+ 
+<para>Ater each package installation you should normally delete the source and
+build directories (for cleanness sake and to save space),
+<emphasis>unless</emphasis> instructed to do otherwise.</para>
 
 <!--
@@ -326 +329 @@
 created by the LFS community.  Most of these solve slight problems, or enable
 some functionality that's not enabled by default.  Please feel free to examine
-the patches database, located at <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/patches"/>, and choose any additional patches you might wish to use.</para>
+the patches database, located at
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/patches/"/>, and choose any
+additional patches you might wish to use.</para>
 
 </sect1>

chapter05/creatingstage1dir.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
 
 <note><para>Study the above command closely. It can be confusing at first
-glance. The <userinput>ln</userinput> command has several syntax variations so
-be sure to check the ln man page before reporting what you may think is an
+glance. The <userinput>ln</userinput> command has several syntax variations,
+so be sure to check the ln man page before reporting what you may think is an
 error.</para></note>
 

chapter05/setting-environment.xml

@@ -38 +38 @@
 <para>The LC_ALL variable controls the localization of certain programs,
 making their messages follow the conventions of a specified country. If your
-host system uses a version of <emphasis>glibc</emphasis> older than 2.2.4,
+host system uses a version of Glibc older than 2.2.4,
 having LC_ALL set to something other than "POSIX" or "C" during this chapter
 may cause trouble if you exit the chroot environment and wish to return later.

chapter06/bison-inst.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
 <para>This package has a test suite available which can perform a number of
 checks to ensure it built correctly.  Should you choose to run it, the 
-following command will do so:</para>
+following command will do so (and takes a long time):</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make check</userinput></screen></para>

chapter06/gettext-inst.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
 <para>This package has a test suite available which can perform a number of
 checks to ensure it built correctly.  Should you choose to run it, the 
-following command will do so:</para>
+following command will do so (and takes a very long time):</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make check</userinput></screen></para>

chapter06/zlib-inst.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <title>Installation of Zlib</title>
 
-<para>Zlib has a potential buffer overflow in its gzprintf() function,
-that, though difficult to take advantage of, should be taken care of. Do
-so by applying this patch:</para>
+<para>Zlib has a potential buffer overflow in its
+<emphasis>gzprintf()</emphasis> function, that, though difficult to take
+advantage of, should be taken care of by applying this patch:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../zlib-&zlib-patch-version;.patch</userinput></screen></para>