Changeset dbc195c for chapter09/reboot.xml

Timestamp:

08/08/2004 02:11:45 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

ee45b2ee

Parents:

1dc34de7

Message:

Completed global edits for upcoming 6.0 release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4003 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter09/reboot.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter09/reboot.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="reboot.html"?>
 
-<para>Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to reboot
-your computer. First exit from the chroot environment:</para>
+<para>Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to
+reboot the computer. First exit from the chroot environment:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>logout</userinput></screen>
@@ -21 +21 @@
 umount $LFS/sys</userinput></screen>    
 
-<para>And unmount the LFS file system:</para>
+<para>And unmount the LFS file system itself:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>umount $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>If at the start you decided to create multiple partitions, you'll need to
-unmount the other partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
+<para>If multiple partitions were created, unmount the other
+partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>umount $LFS/usr
@@ -36 +36 @@
 <screen><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Assuming the Grub boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu
-is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &milestone;</emphasis> automatically.</para>
+<para>Assuming the Grub bootloader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu
+is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &version;</emphasis> automatically.</para>
 
-<para>When the reboot is complete, your LFS system is ready for use and you
-can start adding your own software.</para>
+<para>When the reboot is complete, the LFS system is ready for use and
+software can be added.</para>
 
 </sect1>
+