Changeset dbc195c for chapter09/theend.xml

Timestamp:

08/08/2004 02:11:45 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

ee45b2ee

Parents:

1dc34de7

Message:

Completed global edits for upcoming 6.0 release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4003 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter09/theend.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter09/theend.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
 <indexterm zone="ch-finish-theend"><primary sortas="e-/etc/lfs-release">/etc/lfs-release</primary></indexterm>
 
-<para>Well done! You have finished installing your LFS system. It may have
-been a long process, but we hope it was worth it. We wish you a lot of fun
-with your new shiny custom built Linux system.</para>
+<para>Well done! The new LFS system is installed! We wish you much
+success with your shiny new custom-built Linux system.</para>
 
-<para>It may be a good idea to create an <filename>/etc/lfs-release</filename>
-file. By having this file it is very easy for you (and for us if you are going
-to ask for help with something at some point) to find out which LFS version
-you have installed on your system. Create this file by running:</para>
+<para>It may be a good idea to create an
+<filename>/etc/lfs-release</filename> file. By having this file, it is
+very easy for you (and for us if you need to ask for help at some
+point) to find out which LFS version is installed on the system.
+Create this file by running:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo &version; &gt; /etc/lfs-release</userinput></screen>
 
 </sect1>
+