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08/08/2004 02:11:45 AM (20 years ago)
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Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>
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Completed global edits for upcoming 6.0 release

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    10 <para>We thank you for reading the LFS Book and hope that you've found this
    11 book useful and worth your time.</para>
     10<para>Thank you for reading this LFS book!  We hope that you have
     11found this book helpful and have learned more about the system
     12creation process.</para>
    1213
    13 <para>Now that you have finished installing your LFS system, you may be
    14 wondering <quote>What now?</quote>. To answer that question, we have
    15 composed a list of resources for you.</para>
     14<para>Now that the LFS system is installed, you may be wondering
     15<quote>What next?</quote> To answer that question, we have compiled a
     16list of resources for you.</para>
    1617
    1718<itemizedlist>
    1819<listitem><para>Beyond Linux From Scratch</para>
    1920
    20 <para>The Beyond Linux From Scratch book covers installation procedures
    21 for a wide range of software beyond the scope of the LFS Book. The BLFS
    22 project can be found at <ulink url="&blfs-root;"/>.</para></listitem>
     21<para>The Beyond Linux From Scratch book covers installation
     22procedures for a wide range of software beyond the scope of the LFS
     23Book. The BLFS project is located at <ulink url="&blfs-root;"/>.</para></listitem>
    2324
    2425<listitem><para>LFS Hints</para>
    2526
    26 <para>The LFS Hints are a collection of small, educational documents
    27 submitted by volunteers in the LFS community. The Hints are available at
    28 <ulink url="&hints-index;"/>.</para></listitem>
     27<para>The LFS Hints are a collection of educational documents
     28submitted by volunteers in the LFS community. The Hints are available
     29at <ulink url="&hints-index;"/>.</para></listitem>
    2930
    3031<listitem><para>Mailing lists</para>
    3132
    32 <para>There are several LFS mailing lists you may subscribe to if you are
    33 in need of help. See <xref linkend="ch-scatter-maillists"/> for more
     33<para>There are several LFS mailing lists you may subscribe to if you
     34are in need of help, want to stay current with the latest development,
     35want to contribute to the project and more. See <xref
     36linkend="ch-scatter-maillists"/> for more
    3437information.</para></listitem>
    3538
    3639<listitem><para>The Linux Documentation Project</para>
    3740
    38 <para>The goal of the Linux Documentation Project is to collaborate in
    39 all of the issues of Linux documentation. The LDP features a large collection
    40 of HOWTOs, Guides and man pages; it may be found at
     41<para>The goal of the Linux Documentation Project (LDP) is to
     42collaborate all of the issues of Linux documentation. The LDP features
     43a large collection of HOWTOs, guides, and man pages.  It is located at
    4144<ulink url="http://www.tldp.org/"/>.</para></listitem>
    4245
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    4447
    4548</sect1>
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