Changeset e49e2ea for chapter07

Timestamp:

11/21/2023 08:16:37 PM (11 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

9e76c64

Parents:

7546d8b

Message:

clfs-ng: Fix some grammar errors

Location:

chapter07

Files:

• chroot.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• kernfs.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter07/chroot.xml

@@ -39 +39 @@
 
     <para>This is normal because the shell is not assigned with a
-    controlling terminal yet.  Now set up controlling terminal and
-    environment variables:</para>
+    controlling terminal yet.  Now set up the controlling terminal and
+    some environment variables:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>exec setsid -c /usr/bin/env -i  \
@@ -51 +51 @@
     /bin/bash --login</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The command replace the current shell process with a new shell
+    <para>The command replaces the current shell process with a new shell
     process, with controlling terminal set up.</para>
 

chapter07/introduction.xml

@@ -36 +36 @@
   target system, fortunately without access to the host system.
   Be careful anyway, as if the storage devices of your target system already
-  contain some important data, it's possible to destroy them with bad
+  contains some important data, it's possible to destroy them with bad
   commands.</para>
 

chapter07/kernfs.xml

@@ -73 +73 @@
     <title>Adjusting devtmpfs</title>
 
-    <para>Now <systemitem class='filesystem'>proc</systemitem> filesystem
-    is mounted, we can replace the device nodes for standard I/O streams
+    <para>Now with the
+    <systemitem class='filesystem'>proc</systemitem> filesystem
+    mounted, we can replace the device nodes for standard I/O streams
     with symlinks to pseudo files in
     <filename class="directory">/proc/self/fd</filename> (which are symlinks