Changeset e49e2ea for chapter07/chroot.xml

Timestamp:

11/21/2023 08:16:37 PM (11 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

9e76c64

Parents:

7546d8b

Message:

clfs-ng: Fix some grammar errors

File:

• chapter07/chroot.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter07/chroot.xml

@@ -39 +39 @@
 
     <para>This is normal because the shell is not assigned with a
-    controlling terminal yet.  Now set up controlling terminal and
-    environment variables:</para>
+    controlling terminal yet.  Now set up the controlling terminal and
+    some environment variables:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>exec setsid -c /usr/bin/env -i  \
@@ -51 +51 @@
     /bin/bash --login</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The command replace the current shell process with a new shell
+    <para>The command replaces the current shell process with a new shell
     process, with controlling terminal set up.</para>