Changeset e5846ef for chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml

Timestamp:

06/30/2005 05:53:21 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

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Children:

4d938ef

Parents:

7efa3be

Message:

Round 2 of several minor wording changes in chapter 6 (matt).

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6258 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -53 +53 @@
 <varlistentry>
 <term><parameter>--with-root-prefix=""</parameter></term>
-<listitem><para>Certain programs (such as the
-<command>e2fsck</command> program) are considered essential programs.
-When, for example, <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> is not
-mounted, these essential programs need to be available. They belong in
-directories like <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and
-<filename class="directory">/sbin</filename>. If this option is not
-passed to E2fsprogs' configure, the programs are installed into the
-<filename class="directory">/usr</filename> directory, which is not
-where they should be.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Certain programs (such as the <command>e2fsck</command> program)
+are considered essential programs.  When, for example, <filename
+class="directory">/usr</filename> is not mounted, these essential programs need
+to be available. They belong in directories like <filename
+class="directory">/lib</filename> and <filename
+class="directory">/sbin</filename>. If this option is not passed to E2fsprogs'
+configure, the programs are installed into the <filename
+class="directory">/usr</filename> directory.</para></listitem>
+
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -88 +88 @@
 <userinput>make check</userinput>.</para>
 
-<para>Install most of the package:</para>
+<para>Install the binaries and documentation:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
@@ -265 +265 @@
 <term><command>mke2fs</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>Is used to create a second extended file system on the given
-device</para>
+<para>Creates an ext2 or ext3 file system on the given device</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-e2fsprogs mke2fs"><primary sortas="b-mke2fs">mke2fs</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>