Changeset ee714d3 for chapter04/addinguser.xml

Timestamp:

06/09/2020 09:26:11 PM (4 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

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Children:

79524a0

Parents:

b99b7d3

Message:

Text update to cross2 Chapter 4.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11913 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter04/addinguser.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter04/addinguser.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>When logged in as user <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>,
-  making a single mistake can damage or destroy a system. Therefore, we
-  recommend building the packages in the next chapter as an unprivileged user.
+  making a single mistake can damage or destroy a system. Therefore, 
+  the packages in the next two chapters are built as an unprivileged user.
   You could use your own user name, but to make it easier to set up a clean
   working environment, create a new user called <systemitem
@@ -63 +63 @@
       <term><parameter>lfs</parameter></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>This is the actual name for the created group and user.</para>
+        <para>This is the actual name for the created user.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -96 +96 @@
   <para>Next, login as user <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>.
   This can be done via a virtual console, through a display manager, or with
-  the following substitute user command:</para>
+  the following substitute/switch user command:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>su - lfs</userinput></screen>