Changeset ef13657 for chapter06/iproute2.xml

Timestamp:

08/08/2004 02:11:09 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

5ba3d1d

Parents:

6e41459

Message:

Completed global edits for upcoming 6.0 release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4000 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter06/iproute2.xml (modified) (8 diffs)

chapter06/iproute2.xml

@@ -44 +44 @@
 
     <para>Prepare iproute2 for compilation:</para>
-    <screen> <userinput>./configure </userinput></screen>
+    <screen><userinput>./configure </userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Compile the package:</para>
 
     <screen><userinput>make SBINDIR=/sbin</userinput></screen>
+
+    <para>The meaning of the make option:</para>
 
     <variablelist>
@@ -61 +63 @@
     </variablelist>
 
-    <para>Now install it:</para>
+    <para>Install the package:</para>
 
     <screen><userinput>make SBINDIR=/sbin install</userinput></screen>
@@ -86 +88 @@
             <primary sortas="b-ifstat">ifstat</primary>
           </indexterm>
-          <para>shows the interfaces statistics. Shows the amount of transmitted
-                and received packages by interface</para>
+          <para>shows the interfaces statistic including the amount of transmitted
+                and received packages by interface.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -149 +151 @@
             <primary sortas="b-nstat">nstat</primary>
           </indexterm>
-          <para>Shows network statistics</para>
+          <para>shows network statistics.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -161 +163 @@
             <primary sortas="b-routef">routef</primary>
           </indexterm>
-          <para>A component of ip route. This is for flushing the routing
+          <para>a component of ip route. This is for flushing the routing
                 tables.
           </para>
@@ -175 +177 @@
             <primary sortas="b-routel">routel</primary>
           </indexterm>
-          <para>A component of ip route. This is for listing the routing
+          <para>a component of ip route. This is for listing the routing
                 tables.
           </para>
@@ -213 +215 @@
             <primary sortas="b-ss">ss</primary>
           </indexterm>
-          <para>Similar to the netstat command. Shows active connections.</para>
+          <para>similar to the netstat command. Shows active connections.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -253 +255 @@
   </sect2>
 </sect1>
+