Changeset ef13657 for chapter06/kernfs.xml

Timestamp:

08/08/2004 02:11:09 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

5ba3d1d

Parents:

6e41459

Message:

Completed global edits for upcoming 6.0 release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4000 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/kernfs.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter06/kernfs.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="kernfs.html"?>
 
-<para>Various file systems exported by the kernel don't exist at all on your
-hard drive, but are used to communicate things to and from the kernel itself.</para>
+<para>Various file systems exported by the kernel do not exist on the
+hard drive, but are used to communicate to and from the kernel
+itself.</para>
 
 <para>Begin by creating directories onto which the file systems will be mounted:</para>
@@ -17 +18 @@
 mount -t sysfs sysfs $LFS/sys</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Remember that if for any reason you stop working on your LFS, and start
-again later, it's important to check that these file systems are mounted again
-before entering the chroot environment, otherwise problems could occur.</para>
+<para>Remember that if for any reason you stop working on the LFS
+system and start again later, it is important to check that these file
+systems are mounted again before entering the chroot
+environment.</para>
 
-<para>Shortly, we'll be mounting a few more file systems from within the chroot
-environment. To keep the host up-to-date, we'll do a <quote>fake mount</quote>
-for each of these now:</para>
+<para>Additional file systems will soon be mounted from within the
+chroot environment. To keep the host up-to-date, perform a <quote>fake
+mount</quote> for each of these now:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mount -f -t ramfs ramfs $LFS/dev
@@ -30 +32 @@
 
 </sect1>
+