Changeset f6820bb6 for chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml

Timestamp:

10/30/2022 02:23:55 PM (18 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

6b052ef

Parents:

019499e

Message:

Corrected spelling here and there. Regularized capitaization of package
names, corrected idiom / punctuation, and removed extraneous verbiage.

File:

• chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml

@@ -51 +51 @@
 
     <note><para>There are frequent misunderstandings about this chapter.  The
-    procedures are the same as every other chapter as explained earlier (<xref
-    linkend='buildinstr'/>).  First extract the gcc tarball from the sources
-    directory and then change to the directory created.  Only then should you
+    procedures are the same as every other chapter, as explained earlier (<xref
+    linkend='buildinstr'/>).  First, extract the gcc-&gcc-version; tarball from the sources
+    directory, and then change to the directory created.  Only then should you
     proceed with the instructions below.</para></note>
 
@@ -108 +108 @@
         <term><parameter>--with-glibc-version=&glibc-version;</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This option specifies the version of glibc which will be
+          <para>This option specifies the version of Glibc which will be
           used on the target. It is not relevant to the libc of the host
-          distro because everything compiled by pass1 gcc will run in the
+          distro because everything compiled by pass1 GCC will run in the
           chroot environment, which is isolated from libc of the host
           distro.</para>
@@ -153 +153 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>This switch forces GCC to link its internal libraries
-          statically. We need this because the shared libraries require glibc,
+          statically. We need this because the shared libraries require Glibc,
           which is not yet installed on the target system.</para>
         </listitem>
@@ -205 +205 @@
     does not exist, so the internal header that has just been installed is a
     partial, self-contained file and does not include the extended features of
-    the system header. This is adequate for building glibc, but the full
+    the system header. This is adequate for building Glibc, but the full
     internal header will be needed later.  Create a full version of the internal
     header using a command that is identical to what the GCC build system does