Changeset fc885c1 for prologue/typography.xml

Timestamp:

07/09/2005 04:25:02 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

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Children:

39df528

Parents:

0ba4e25

Message:

Several typos and grammar fixes (sash)

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6464 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• prologue/typography.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

prologue/typography.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
 <para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para>
 
-<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book,
-mainly to emphasize important points or items.</para>
+<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book.  Its main
+purpose is to emphasize important points or items.</para>
 
 <para><ulink url="&lfs-root;"/></para>
 
-<para>This format is used for hyperlinks, both within the LFS
-community and to external pages, including HOWTOs, download locations,
+<para>This format is used for hyperlinks both within the LFS
+community and to external pages.  It includes HOWTOs, download locations,
 and websites.</para>
 
@@ -53 +53 @@
 
 <para>This format is used to encapsulate text that is not to be typed
-as seen or copy-and-pasted.</para>
+as seen or copied-and-pasted.</para>
 
 <para><filename>passwd(5)</filename></para>