Changeset fde4f7d for chapter06/hotplug.xml

Timestamp:

07/01/2005 08:39:25 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

d001e2b

Parents:

4d938ef

Message:

Brought all occurences of LFS-Bootscripts into conformity.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6288 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter06/hotplug.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter06/hotplug.xml

@@ -43 +43 @@
 <screen><userinput>cp etc/hotplug/pnp.distmap /etc/hotplug</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Remove the init script that Hotplug installs, since we're going to be
-using the script included with LFS-Bootscripts:</para>
+<para>Remove the init script that Hotplug installs since we are going to be
+using the script included in the LFS-Bootscripts package:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>rm -rf /etc/init.d</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Network device hotplugging is not supported by LFS-Bootscripts yet. For
-that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:</para>
+<para>Network device hotplugging is not yet supported by the LFS-Bootscripts
+package. For that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>rm -f /etc/hotplug/net.agent</userinput></screen>
@@ -92 +92 @@
 <listitem>
 <para>These scripts are used for cold plugging, i.e., detecting and acting upon
-hardware already present during system startup.  They are called by the
-<filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes from the LFS-Bootscripts
-package.  The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that
-were lost during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not
-mounted by the kernel</para>
+hardware already present during system startup. They are called by the
+<filename>hotplug</filename> initscript included in the LFS-Bootscripts package.
+The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that were lost
+during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not mounted by
+the kernel</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-rc"><primary
 sortas="d-/etc/hotplug/*.rc">/etc/hotplug/*.rc</primary></indexterm>