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 <partintro><para>The <acronym>LFS</acronym> book covers setting up networking
 by connecting to a <acronym>LAN</acronym> with a static
 <acronym>IP</acronym>.  There are other methods used to connect to
 <acronym>LAN</acronym>'s and other networks (such as the Internet).  We cover
+<acronym>IP</acronym> address.  There are other methods used to connect to
+a <acronym>LAN</acronym> and other networks (such as the Internet).  We cover
 the most popular methods in this chapter.</para></partintro>

connect/dhcp/dhcp-client.xml

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 <para>The <application><acronym>DHCP</acronym></application> package comes with
 both a client (called <command>dhclient</command>) and a server program for
+both a client (<command>dhclient</command>) and a server program for
 using <acronym>DHCP</acronym>.  If you want to install this package,
 the instructions can be found at <xref linkend="dhcp"/>.
 …
 (<command>dhclient</command>).</para>
 <para>To configure <command>dhclient</command>, we need to first install
+<para>To configure <command>dhclient</command>, you need to first install
 the network service script,
 <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network-devices/services/dhclient</filename>
 …
 ONBOOT=yes
 DHCP_START="<replaceable>[place appropriate start parameters here]</replaceable>"
 DHCP_STOP="-r <replaceable>[add additional stop parameters here]</replaceable>
+DHCP_STOP="-r <replaceable>[add additional stop parameters here]</replaceable>"
 SERVICE=dhclient
 <command>EOF</command></userinput></screen>
 …
 <para> You should then create
 the <filename>/etc/dhclient.conf</filename> using the following
+<filename>/etc/dhclient.conf</filename> using the following
 commands.  Append to the file if you have more than one interface:</para>

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 <para><acronym>DHCP</acronym> stands for Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol.
 It is a protocol which is used by many sites to automatically provide
+It is a protocol used by many sites to automatically provide
 information such as <acronym>IP</acronym> addresses, subnet masks and routing
 information to computers.  If your network uses <acronym>DHCP</acronym>, you
 …
 <acronym>DHCP</acronym> is also used by some cable modems.</para>
 <para>We currently provide installation instructions for two
+<para><acronym>BLFS</acronym> currently provides installation instructions for two
 <acronym>DHCP</acronym> clients, <command>dhclient</command> (from the
 <application>dhcp</application> package) and <command>dhcpcd</command>.
+We present both sets of installation instructions which also discuss how
+<acronym>BLFS</acronym> presents both sets of installation instructions
+and discuss how
 to create an appropriate service script to work with the
 <command>network</command> bootscript and the <acronym>DHCP</acronym>

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 <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
 <para>To configure <command>dhcpcd</command>, we need to first install
+<para>To configure <command>dhcpcd</command>, you need to first install
 the network service script,
 <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network-devices/services/dhcpcd</filename>
 …
 <para>Now create the <filename>ifconfig.eth0</filename> configuration
 file using the following commands.  Adjust appropriatly for additional
+file using the following commands.  Adjust appropriately for additional
 interfaces.</para>

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 required during the boot process and
 <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> may be network
 mounted in which case, <command>dhcpcd</command> wouldn't be available due to
+mounted, in which case <command>dhcpcd</command> wouldn't be available due to
 being on the network!  Therefore, depending on your situation, you may want it
 to be installed in <filename class="directory">/sbin</filename> or
 …
 <filename class="directory">/sbin</filename>.</para>
 <para><parameter>--sysconfdir=/var/lib</parameter>: This command install
+<para><parameter>--sysconfdir=/var/lib</parameter>: This command installs
 configuration files in the <filename class="directory">/var/lib</filename>
 directory.</para>
 <para><parameter>--mandir=/usr/share/man</parameter>: This command
 install the man pages to the <filename class="directory">/usr/share/man</filename>
+installs the man pages to the <filename class="directory">/usr/share/man</filename>
 directory.</para>

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8	8	<sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
9	9
10		<para>The <application><acronym>PPP</acronym></application> daemon ~~itself~~
	10	<para>The <application><acronym>PPP</acronym></application> daemon
11	11	requires very little configuration. The main trick is scripting the
12	12	connection. This can be done either using the chat program which comes with

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 wvdialconf /etc/wvdial.conf</command></userinput></screen>
 <para><command>wvdialconf</command> will test that you have a working modem
 and try to determine it's exact setup. You will then need to enter your
+and try to determine its exact setup. You will then need to enter your
 <acronym>ISP</acronym>'s phone number, login name and password into the
 <filename>/etc/wvdial.conf</filename> file.</para>
 …
 <screen><userinput><command>wvdial</command></userinput></screen>
 <para>For more information examine the wvdialconf, wvdial.conf and wvdial man pages.</para>
+<para>For more information, examine the wvdialconf, wvdial.conf and wvdial man pages.</para>
 </sect3>

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2	2	<title>Introduction to <application>WvDial</application></title>
3	3
4		<para>The <application>WvDial</application> package contains a no nonsense,
	4	<para>The <application>WvDial</application> package contains a no-nonsense,
5	5	quick and easy to use alternative to <command>chat</command> and
6	6	<command>pppd</command> scripts. If you simply want to dial a modem

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 <command>adsl-start</command> script.</para>
 <para><emphasis>Optionaly</emphasis> install the
+<para><emphasis>Optionally</emphasis> install the
 <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network-devices/services/pppoe</filename> service
 script included with the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/>
 …
 <command>EOF</command></userinput></screen>
 <para>Also, If you had previously configured the network interface that will now
+<para>Also, if you had previously configured the network interface that will now
 use <acronym>PPPoE</acronym>, you should remove the interface configuration
 files for that interface:

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