Changeset 32d0e29 for postlfs


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Timestamp:
04/09/2008 03:40:36 PM (16 years ago)
Author:
Randy McMurchy <randy@…>
Branches:
10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal
Children:
8ae8a12a
Parents:
46a27c2
Message:

Fixed typos and minor rewording in various package instructions

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@7370 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

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postlfs
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  • postlfs/config/autofs.xml

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    66  <!ENTITY autofs-patch-dir     "http://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/daemons/autofs/v5">
    77  <!ENTITY autofs-download-http "http://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/daemons/autofs/v5/autofs-&autofs-version;.tar.bz2">
    8   <!ENTITY autofs-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/daemons/autofs/v5/autofs-&autofs-version;.tar.bz2">
     8  <!ENTITY autofs-download-ftp  "ftp://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/daemons/autofs/v5/autofs-&autofs-version;.tar.bz2">
    99  <!ENTITY autofs-md5sum        "27839fe6fa8105b2b7d31bc922fd7cf6">
    1010  <!ENTITY autofs-size          "221 KB">
    11   <!ENTITY autofs-buildsize     "8.9 MB">
     11  <!ENTITY autofs-buildsize     "9 MB">
    1212  <!ENTITY autofs-time          "less than 0.1 SBU">
    1313]>
    1414
    15 <sect1 id="autofs" xreflabel="autofs-&autofs-version;">
     15<sect1 id="autofs" xreflabel="Autofs-&autofs-version;">
    1616  <?dbhtml filename="autofs.html"?>
    1717
    … …  
    3030    <title>Introduction to Autofs</title>
    3131
    32     <para>The <application>autofs</application> package contains userspace
     32    <para>The <application>Autofs</application> package contains userspace
    3333    tools that work with the kernel to mount and un-mount removable file
    3434    systems. The primary use is to mount external network file systems like
    35     nfs (see <xref linkend="nfs-utils"/>) or Samba (see <xref linkend="samba3"/>)
     35    NFS (see <xref linkend="nfs-utils"/>) or Samba (see <xref linkend="samba3"/>)
    3636    on demand.</para>
    3737   
    … …  
    6565
    6666    <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Additional Downloads</bridgehead>
    67         <para>Recommended Patches: There are frequent patches issued
    68         for <application>autofs</application>.  To get the current patches,
    69         start in the same directory as the main tar file and run:</para>
     67
     68    <para>Recommended Patches: There are frequent patches issued
     69    for <application>Autofs</application>.  To get the current patches,
     70    start in the same directory as the main tar file and run:</para>
    7071       
    7172<screen><userinput>wget &autofs-patch-dir;/patch_order-&autofs-version; &amp;&amp;
    72 sed 's;autofs;&autofs-patch-dir;/autofs;' patch_order-&autofs-version; &gt; wget-list &amp;&amp;
     73sed 's;autofs;&autofs-patch-dir;/autofs;' \
     74    patch_order-&autofs-version; &gt; wget-list &amp;&amp;
    7375wget -i wget-list</userinput></screen>
    7476   
    … …  
    102104    <title>Installation of Autofs</title>
    103105
    104     <para>Install <application>autofs</application> by running the following
     106    <para>Install <application>Autofs</application> by running the following
    105107    commands:</para>
    106108
    … …  
    124126
    125127    <para><command>for f in `cat ../patch_order-&autofs-version;`; do
    126       patch -Np1 -i ../$f;  done</command>: This command applies all the
    127       patches fetched earlier in the correct order.</para>
     128    patch -Np1 -i ../$f;  done</command>: This command applies all the
     129    patches fetched earlier in the correct order.</para>
    128130
    129131    <para><command>ln -sf  ../init.d/autofs
    … …  
    167169      <para>The installation process creates <filename>auto.master</filename>,
    168170      <filename>auto.misc</filename>,  <filename>auto.smb</filename>, and
    169       <filename>auto.net</filename>. You will replace the
    170       <filename>auto.master</filename> with the following commands:</para>
     171      <filename>auto.net</filename>. Replace the
     172      <filename>auto.master</filename> file with the following commands:</para>
    171173
    172174<screen role="root"><userinput>mv /etc/auto.master /etc/auto.master.bak &amp;&amp;
    … …  
    188190      <para>that will mount a cdrom as <filename>/media/auto/cd</filename> if
    189191      that directory is accessed.  The <option>--ghost</option> option tells
    190       the automounter to create "ghost" versions (i.e. empty directories) of
    191       all the mount points listed in the configuration file regardless of
    192       whether any of the file systems is actually mounted or not. This is very
    193       convenient and highly recommended, because it will show you the available
    194       auto-mountable file systems as existing directories, even when their file
    195       systems aren't currently mounted. Without the <option>--ghost</option>
    196       option, you'll have to remember the names of the directories. As soon as
    197       you try to access one of them, the directory will be created and the file
    198       system will be mounted. When the file system gets unmounted again, the
    199       directory is destroyed too, unless the <option>--ghost</option> option
    200       was given.</para>
     192      the automounter to create <quote>ghost</quote> versions (i.e. empty
     193      directories) of all the mount points listed in the configuration file
     194      regardless whether any of the file systems are actually mounted or not.
     195      This is very convenient and highly recommended, because it will show you
     196      the available auto-mountable file systems as existing directories, even
     197      when their file systems aren't currently mounted. Without the
     198      <option>--ghost</option> option, you'll have to remember the names of the
     199      directories. As soon as you try to access one of them, the directory will
     200      be created and the file system will be mounted. When the file system gets
     201      unmounted again, the directory is destroyed too, unless the
     202      <option>--ghost</option> option was given.</para>
    201203
    202204      <note>
    203 
    204205        <para>An alternative method would be to specify another automount
    205         location such as <filename>/var/lib/auto/cdrom</filename> and create a
    206         symbolic link from <filename>/media/cdrom</filename> to the automount
    207         location.</para>
    208      
     206        location such as <filename
     207        class='directory'>/var/lib/auto/cdrom</filename> and create a
     208        symbolic link from <filename class='directory'>/media/cdrom</filename>
     209        to the automount location.</para>
    209210      </note>
    210211
    … …  
    226227      are covered on the next page.</para>
    227228
    228       <para>This package could also be used to mount SMB shares, that feature
    229       is not configured in these instructions.  For additional configuration
    230       information, see the man pages for auto.master(5).  There
     229      <para>This package could also be used to mount SMB shares, however that
     230      feature is not configured in these instructions.  For additional
     231      configuration information, see the man pages for auto.master(5).  There
    231232      are also web resources such as this <ulink
    232233      url='http://gentoo-wiki.com/HOWTO_Auto_mount_filesystems_(AUTOFS)#Config_files'>AUTOFS
    233       HOWTO</ulink>
    234       availble.</para>
     234      HOWTO</ulink> available.</para>
    235235
    236236    </sect3>
     237
    237238<!--
    238239    <sect3  id="autofs-init">
    … …  
    258259    </sect3>
    259260-->
     261
    260262  </sect2>
    261263
    … …  
    300302
    301303</sect1>
    302 

  • postlfs/editors/bluefish.xml

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    66
    77  <!ENTITY bluefish-download-http "http://www.bennewitz.com/bluefish/stable/source/bluefish-1.0.7.tar.bz2">
    8   <!-- <!ENTITY bluefish-download-ftp  "ftp://ftp.ratisbona.com/pub/bluefish/downloads/bluefish-&bluefish-version;.tar.bz2"> -->
    9   <!ENTITY bluefish-download-ftp  " ">
     8  <!ENTITY bluefish-download-ftp  "&gentoo-ftp-repo;/bluefish-&bluefish-version;.tar.bz2">
    109  <!ENTITY bluefish-md5sum        "2c3b3c9c8f8e32b9473dfd879f216dea">
    11   <!ENTITY bluefish-size          "1.49 MB">
    12   <!ENTITY bluefish-buildsize     "18.0 MB">
     10  <!ENTITY bluefish-size          "1.4 MB">
     11  <!ENTITY bluefish-buildsize     "18 MB">
    1312  <!ENTITY bluefish-time          "0.3 SBU">
    1413]>
    1514
    16 <sect1 id="bluefish">
     15<sect1 id="bluefish" xreflabel="Bluefish-&bluefish-version;">
    1716  <?dbhtml filename="bluefish.html"?>
    1817
    … …  
    6968    <xref linkend="libgnomeui"/>,
    7069    <xref linkend="gnome-mime-data"/>,
    71     <xref linkend="desktop-file-utils"/> and
     70    <xref linkend="desktop-file-utils"/>, and
    7271    <xref linkend="shared-mime-info"/></para>
    7372
    … …  
    9089    <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
    9190
    92 <screen role="root"><userinput>make install
    93 </userinput></screen>
     91<screen role="root"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
    9492
    9593  </sect2>

  • postlfs/editors/vim.xml

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    108108    <note>
    109109      <para>If you recompile <application>Vim</application> to link against
    110       <application>X</application>, and your <application>X</application>
     110      <application>X</application> and your <application>X</application>
    111111      libraries are not on the root partition, you will no longer have an editor
    112112      for use in emergencies. You may choose to install an additional editor,
    … …  
    161161    following command (requires <xref linkend="rsync"/>):</para>
    162162     
    163 <screen><userinput>rsync -avzcP --delete --exclude="/dos/" --exclude="/spell/" ftp.nluug.nl::Vim/runtime/ ./runtime/</userinput></screen>
    164 
    165     <para>To install the runtime files and to regenerate the
    166     <filename>tags</filename> file, run as the
    167     <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
     163<screen><userinput>rsync -avzcP --delete --exclude="/dos/" --exclude="/spell/" \
     164    ftp.nluug.nl::Vim/runtime/ ./runtime/</userinput></screen>
     165
     166    <para>To install the runtime files and regenerate the
     167    <filename>tags</filename> file, as the
     168    <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user issue:</para>
    168169
    169170<screen role="root"><userinput>make -C src installruntime &amp;&amp;
    … …  
    175176    <title>Command Explanations</title>
    176177
    177     <para><command>patch &hellip;</command>: These patches are the same as LFS
    178     and update the package with upstream patches and ensure the man pages
    179     are placed in the proper locations.</para>
     178    <para><command>patch &hellip;</command>: These patches are the same as the
     179    ones used in the LFS build used to update the package with upstream patches
     180    and ensure the man pages are placed in the proper locations.</para>
    180181
    181182    <para><parameter>--with-features=huge</parameter>: This switch enables all
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