Changeset 32d0e29 for postlfs/editors/vim.xml

Timestamp:

04/09/2008 03:40:36 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

8ae8a12a

Parents:

46a27c2

Message:

Fixed typos and minor rewording in various package instructions

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@7370 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/editors/vim.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

postlfs/editors/vim.xml

@@ -108 +108 @@
     <note>
       <para>If you recompile <application>Vim</application> to link against
-      <application>X</application>, and your <application>X</application>
+      <application>X</application> and your <application>X</application>
       libraries are not on the root partition, you will no longer have an editor
       for use in emergencies. You may choose to install an additional editor,
@@ -161 +161 @@
     following command (requires <xref linkend="rsync"/>):</para>
       
-<screen><userinput>rsync -avzcP --delete --exclude="/dos/" --exclude="/spell/" ftp.nluug.nl::Vim/runtime/ ./runtime/</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>To install the runtime files and to regenerate the
-    <filename>tags</filename> file, run as the
-    <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
+<screen><userinput>rsync -avzcP --delete --exclude="/dos/" --exclude="/spell/" \
+    ftp.nluug.nl::Vim/runtime/ ./runtime/</userinput></screen>
+
+    <para>To install the runtime files and regenerate the
+    <filename>tags</filename> file, as the
+    <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user issue:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>make -C src installruntime &amp;&amp;
@@ -175 +176 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para><command>patch &hellip;</command>: These patches are the same as LFS
-    and update the package with upstream patches and ensure the man pages
-    are placed in the proper locations.</para>
+    <para><command>patch &hellip;</command>: These patches are the same as the
+    ones used in the LFS build used to update the package with upstream patches
+    and ensure the man pages are placed in the proper locations.</para>
 
     <para><parameter>--with-features=huge</parameter>: This switch enables all