Changeset 4afc2603 for introduction/welcome/which.xml

Timestamp:

12/29/2005 01:24:51 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

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Children:

5254d12

Parents:

17be8c3

Message:

Changes to the Introduction section; standardized the file structure layout, standardized the id tags (except bootscripts) and some minor textual modifications

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@5496 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• introduction/welcome/which.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

introduction/welcome/which.xml

@@ -6 +6 @@
 ]>
 
-<sect1 id="intro-welcome-whichsections" xreflabel="Which sections of the book?">
+<sect1 id="whichsections" xreflabel="Which sections of the book?">
   <?dbhtml filename="which.html"?>
 
@@ -17 +17 @@
 
   <para>Unlike the Linux From Scratch book, BLFS isn't designed to be
-  followed in a linear manner.  This is because LFS  provides instructions
+  followed in a linear manner. This is because LFS provides instructions
   on how to create a base system which is capable of turning into anything
-  from a web server to a multimedia desktop system.  BLFS is where we try
+  from a web server to a multimedia desktop system. BLFS is where we try
   to guide you in the process of going from the base system to your intended
   destination. Choice is very much involved.</para>
 
   <para>Everyone who reads the book will want to read certain sections.  The
-  <xref linkend="introduction"/> part&ndash;which you are currently
-  reading&ndash;contains generic information.  Especially take note of the
-  information in Important Information (<xref linkend="intro-important"/>), as
-  this contains comments about how to unpack software and various other aspects
-  which apply throughout the book.</para>
+  <xref linkend="introduction"/> part, which you are currently reading,
+  contains generic information.  Especially take note of the information in
+  <xref linkend="important"/>, as this contains comments about how to
+  unpack software, issues related to using different locales and various other
+  aspects which apply throughout the book.</para>
 
   <para>The part on <xref linkend="postlfs"/> is where most people will want
@@ -39 +39 @@
   system.</para>
 
-<para>Following these basic items, most people will want to at least browse
+  <para>Following these basic items, most people will want to at least browse
   through the <xref linkend="general"/> part of the book.  This part contains
   information on many items which are prerequisites for other sections of the
-  book as well as some items (such as Programming (<xref linkend="general-prog"/>)
+  book as well as some items (such as <xref linkend="general-prog"/>)
   which are useful in their own right.  Note that you don't have to install all
   of these libraries and packages found in this part to start with, each
-  BLFS install procedure tells you which packages
+  BLFS installation procedure tells you which packages
   it depends upon so you can choose the program you want to install and see
   what it needs.</para>
@@ -61 +61 @@
   more advanced network services.  These are dealt with in the <xref
   linkend="server"/> part of the book.  Those wanting to build servers
-  should find  a good starting point there.  Note that <xref linkend="server"/>
+  should find a good starting point there.  Note that this section
   also contains information on various database packages.</para>
 
   <para>The next parts of the book principally deal with desktop systems.  This
-  portion of the book starts with a part talking about <xref linkend="x"/>.  This
+  portion of the book starts with a part talking about <xref linkend="x"/>. This
   part also deals with some generic X-based libraries (<xref linkend="x-lib"/>).
   After this, <xref linkend="kde"/> and <xref linkend="gnome"/> are given their
@@ -83 +83 @@
 
 </sect1>
-