Changeset 4de7ca7 for introduction/important/starting.xml

Timestamp:

09/23/2018 05:33:20 PM (6 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

basic

Children:

20ce064

Parents:

6397333

Message:

Numerous typos and text corrections

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/branches/basic@20528 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

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• introduction/important/starting.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

introduction/important/starting.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
 
      <para>
-        A sever is the simplier category. Generally this consistes of a web
+        A server is the simpler category. Generally this consists of a web
         server such as the 
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/server/apache.html">Apache HTTP Server</ulink>
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;server/apache.html">Apache HTTP Server</ulink>
         and a database server such as
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/server/mariadb.html">MariaDB</ulink>. 
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;server/mariadb.html">MariaDB</ulink>. 
         However other services are possible. The operating system
         embedded in a single use device falls into this category.
@@ -41 +41 @@
         On the other hand, a workstation is much more complex. It generally
         requires a graphical user environment such as 
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/lxde/lxde.html">LXDE</ulink>, 
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/xfce/xfce.html">XFCE</ulink>, 
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/kde/kde.html">KDE</ulink>, or 
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/gnome/gnome.html">Gnome</ulink>
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;lxde/lxde.html">LXDE</ulink>, 
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;xfce/xfce.html">XFCE</ulink>, 
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;kde/kde.html">KDE</ulink>, or 
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;gnome/gnome.html">Gnome</ulink>
         (systemd versions of LFS only) based on the 
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/x/installing.html">X Window graphical environment</ulink>
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;x/installing.html">X Window graphical environment</ulink>
         and several graphical based applications such as the
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/xsoft/firefox.html">Firefox web browser</ulink>, 
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/xsoft/thunderbird.html">Thunderbird email client</ulink>,
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;xsoft/firefox.html">Firefox web browser</ulink>, 
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;xsoft/thunderbird.html">Thunderbird email client</ulink>,
         or 
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;/xsoft/libreoffice.html">LibreOffice office suite</ulink>. 
+        <ulink url="&blfs-book;xsoft/libreoffice.html">LibreOffice office suite</ulink>. 
         These applications require many (several hundred depending on
         desired capabilities) more packages of support applications and
@@ -146 +146 @@
 
     <para>
-       Note that the last three commands inthe script are commented out. These
-       are useful if those directories are mounted as separate partitons on the
+       Note that the last three commands in the script are commented out. These
+       are useful if those directories are mounted as separate partitions on the
        host system and will be mounted when booting the completed LFS/BLFS system. 
     </para>
@@ -158 +158 @@
 
     <para>
-        Another issue pointed out by the scriptis where to store downloaded
+        Another issue pointed out by the script is where to store downloaded
         package files. This location is arbitrary. It can be in a regular
         user's home directory such as ~/sources or in a global location like
@@ -167 +167 @@
 
     <para>
-        A last convenince feature presented here is to streamline the process
+        A last convenience feature presented here is to streamline the process
         of entering the chroot environment. This can be done with an alias
         placed in a user's ~/.bashrc file on the host system: