Changeset 98078a6 for postlfs

Timestamp:

10/16/2007 11:56:37 AM (17 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

c3c4467

Parents:

d59bdd1b

Message:

Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections by applying patches provided by Chris Staub - Thanks, Chris

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@7114 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

postlfs

Files:

• config/bootdisk.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• editors/vim.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• shells/zsh.xml (modified) (1 diff)

postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
     device.  As the name <emphasis>rescue</emphasis> implies, the host
     system has a problem, often lost partition information or corrupted file
-    systems, that prevent it from booting and/or operating normally.  For
+    systems, that prevents it from booting and/or operating normally.  For
     this reason, you <emphasis>must not</emphasis> depend on resources from
     the host being "rescued".  To presume that any given partition or hard

postlfs/editors/vim.xml

@@ -207 +207 @@
 
       <para><application>Vim-7.0</application> introduced an
-      integrated spell checker that doesn't requires additional libraries to be
+      integrated spell checker that doesn't require additional libraries to be
       installed.  To enable the spell checker you can set the following in
       one of the configuration files: </para>
@@ -225 +225 @@
       them to <filename class="directory"> ~/.vim/spell </filename> or in
       <filename class="directory">
-      /usr/share/vim/vim70/spell/</filename>.</para>
+      /usr/share/vim/vim71/spell/</filename>.</para>
 
       <para>For more information about the spell checker and some other
@@ -249 +249 @@
     descriptions can be found in the <ulink
     url="&lfs-root;/chapter06/vim.html#contents-vim">LFS Vim Installation
-    Instrutions</ulink></para>
+    Instructions</ulink></para>
 
     <segmentedlist>

postlfs/shells/zsh.xml

@@ -94 +94 @@
     <title>Installation of ZSH</title>
 
-    <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it the same
-    way you would the source tarball. The documentation will unpack into
-    the <filename class='directory'>Doc</filename> directory of the source
-    tree.</para>
+    <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it with
+    the following command:</para>
+
+<screen><userinput>tar --strip-components=1 -xvf ../zsh-&zsh-version;-doc.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Install <application>ZSH</application> by running the following