Changeset da822b6 for postlfs

Timestamp:

07/22/2005 12:22:34 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

e45ae14c

Parents:

443eee56

Message:

Fixed minor typos in the 'Creating a Boot Device' section

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@4757 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml

@@ -46 +46 @@
     <para>The software of today's systems has grown large.  Linux 2.6 no longer
     supports booting directly from a floppy.  In spite of this, there are solutions
-    available using older version of Linux.  One of the best is Tom's Root/Boot
+    available using older versions of Linux.  One of the best is Tom's Root/Boot
     Disk available at <ulink url='http://www.toms.net/rb/'/>.  This will provide a
     minimal Linux system on a single floppy disk and provides the ability to
@@ -68 +68 @@
 
     <para>In the future, the build instructions for this CD-ROM will be presented,
-    but they are not available at this writing.</para>
+    but they are not available at the time of this writing.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -80 +80 @@
     can save critical data to the drive as well as use it to diagnose and recover
     a damaged system.  Booting such a drive requires BIOS support, but building the
-    system consists of formatting the drive, adding <application>grub</application>
-    as well as the kernel and supporting files.</para>
+    system consists of formatting the drive, adding <application>GRUB</application>
+    as well as the Linux kernel and supporting files.</para>
 
   </sect2>