Changeset e45ae14c for postlfs

Timestamp:

07/22/2005 12:43:42 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

9e4bed20

Parents:

da822b6

Message:

Minor textual changes in the 'Configuration Introduction' section

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@4758 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• postlfs/config/config.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

postlfs/config/config.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>The intention of LFS is to provide a basic system which you can
-  build upon.  There are several things, about tidying up the system, which
+  build upon.  There are several things about tidying up the system which
   many people wonder about once they have done the base install.
   We hope to cover these issues in this chapter.</para>
@@ -18 +18 @@
   <para>Most people coming from non-Unix like backgrounds to Linux find the
   concept of text-only configuration files slightly strange.  In Linux, just
-  about all configuration is done via text files. The majority of these files
-  can be found in the <filename>/etc</filename> hierarchy. There are often
+  about all configuration is done via the manipulation of text files. The
+  majority of these files can be found in the
+  <filename class='directory'>/etc</filename> hierarchy. There are often
   graphical configuration programs available for different subsystems but most
-  are simply pretty front ends to the process of editing the file. The advantage
-  of text-only configuration is that you can edit parameters using your favorite
-  text editor, whether that be <command>vim</command>,
-  <command>emacs</command>, or anything else.</para>
+  are simply pretty front ends to the process of editing a text file. The
+  advantage of text-only configuration is that you can edit parameters using
+  your favorite text editor, whether that be <command>vim</command>,
+  <command>emacs</command>, or any other editor.</para>
 
-  <para>The first task is making a recovery diskette because it's the most
-  critical need. Then the system is configured to ease addition of
-  new users, in <xref linkend="postlfs-config-bootdisk"/>, because this
-  can affect the choices you make in the two subsequent topics&mdash;<xref
-  linkend="postlfs-config-profile"/> and <xref linkend="postlfs-config-vimrc"/>.</para>
+  <para>The first task is making a recovery boot device in
+  <xref linkend="postlfs-config-bootdisk"/> because it's the most critical need.
+  Then the system is configured to ease addition of new users, because this
+  can affect the choices you make in the two subsequent
+  topics&mdash;<xref linkend="postlfs-config-profile"/> and
+  <xref linkend="postlfs-config-vimrc"/>.</para>
 
   <para> The remaining topics, <xref linkend="postlfs-config-logon"/>,